꧁══════════•༺༉ { Canonized } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards granted! ❀ ❀ Comments ❀ Make sure Makt spends some time stretching before and/or after exercising to both warm up and improve mobility! But yes, this is a more correct setting, haha. ꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

꧁══════════•༺༉ { Canonized } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards granted! ❀ ❀ Comments ❀ I'm not sure how low his skill was meant to be in this thread, but if he was in the Novice-Apprentice range he likely would've pushed himself into lesser Mageburn. It doesn't really matter since this is a memory and...

꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂ I know you made this like a month ago; sorry I completely blanked on responding. I do genuinely like the idea of having a physical enhancement Dominion available for anyone to use. My feedback is actually a suggested buff; I don't see why Rejuvenation...

꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂ Hey! We have revised our Dominion system (follow this link: link) since this was written. If you come back, would you mind reworking this into that system? Sorry that's a bit of a pain, but you should still be able to accomplish your core goals...

Summer 85, year 124 of the third age Eirun possessed some awareness that Engill had stirred the moment she’d begun to manipulate the ætumetal; in the confines of her Grove, she could feel any changes to the plants growing within– whether they were her creations or not. Still, she waited; it was...

Summer 85, year 124 of the third age The ceiling of the cavern they were in was reasonably tall; if Makt needed to, he could take to the air at least to some degree. Would he be able to soar high into the sky as he might normally? Well, no, but there was enough room overheard for him to avoid...

Fælnir Jarl, Hælga von'LundqvistJarl of Frostlund and prolific shaman, Hælga is a beloved leader to her people. Born to a small village in Frostlund, Hælga was recognized by the village shaman as having immense potential from the start. As such, she made sure to train the young woman in the...

꧁══════════•༺༉ { Reviewed } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Velho+9 XP (1284 wc) ❀ Comments ❀ Retirement of Æhti as a CNPC to Velho; he is now a setting NPC I can use in Dungeoneering threads, but will no longer be involved in Velho's story. ꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

Seasonal Points Submissions Thread For receiving seasonal rewards. Follow the Seasonal Points rules. After purchasing an item with points here in this thread, you may then write a story in order to have the purchase(s) canonized. Be sure to create write-ups and appropriate links to any...

Summer 85, year 124 of the third age When Makt went back to speak with his master, his master would know that ‘payment from the Jarl’ meant ‘payment from the Oddviti’– the Æld’Norai overseer who pulled the strings from the shadows. And to him, this would translate to a handsome sum of Alkahest...

Summer 85, year 124 of the third age Eirun nodded, an encouraging smile painted 'cross her lips when the younger Draoidh indicated she was ready. The Fiadhaich was a bit surprised to see that Engill composed her cocoon with only one plant– a coruscant, metallic wood she recognized quickly as...

Summer 85, year 124 of the third age From the way Aric was dressed, Makt would be able to tell that he was a man of importance amongst Fælnir. Mages of high status within the warbands were usually decorated similarly, with the purple of his clothing being favored amongst those native to...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Tul+19 XP (1,969 wc) Själ (Cælum)+9 XP (855 wc) Æhti+5 XP (536 wc) ❀ Comments ❀ This thread is being graded because Cælum (and consequently Själ) has been retired. Tul is a charming character and I quite liked this interaction...

꧁══════════•༺༉ { Canonized } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ ❀ Comments ❀ Please notate these costs/additions to your CSes as appropriate ❀ Re-canonizing this after necessary adjustments regarding Ensorcelling. ꧁══════════• ༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

꧁══════════•༺༉ { Canonized } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Just to clarify about Ensorcelled Conjurations: ❀ If Makt is casting Inermanteia from the ring and using the Alkahest to cast, it may not ever be downcast, and one cast will always result in the depletion of its Alkahest Reserves. ❀ If...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Canonized } ༉༻•══════════꧂ Math on the rewards looks correct to me. These little vignettes give nice insight into the Blackhalls; I'm excited to see more with your lil' Null family. ꧁══════════• ༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Retired} ༉༻•══════════꧂ Ishtar has been retired in this thread, and she is now Væleri's CNPC. ꧁══════════• ༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

Why did you put 8 as the bonus for Strange Journey? Bonus XP is a 1:1 mirror of whatever you gained in thread, so it should also be 17; otherwise, this looks fine. Do you have any other open threads I could grade for you, though? Edit: Looks like you also input Dragons Meet XP incorrectly...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ Velho + Skrípi+18 XP (1829 wc) Ishtar+17 XP (1726 wc) I really enjoyed writing with Ishtar & am looking forward to future threads with her and/or Væleri! <3 ꧁══════════• ༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

Summer 85, year 124 of the third age “Glad to hear it– you might also consider learning to Apparate yourself, in time,” Eirun replied, her high opinion of Apparation being apparent in her tone. When Engill indicated that she was ready, the elder Draoidh would approach her and then place a...