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>Suffocate - Are you saying this is delivered through a bite, or the blood? This would make more sense as a passive if it's through exposure to the Leviathan's blood. - Resistance is gradual per tier. Master Resistance would still be at least half as effective against Ascended-level toxins. >...

>The Metaphor you pick dictates which Metaphor you may grant to your NPCs. This means that you can only give NPCs the Metaphor you first inject into yourself. It's a blanket rule OOC to prevent abuse of the Gramarye system IC, regardless of if an individual Arcana is abusable. > Allows the...

Omnidirectional through the water as if it were air - Clarify their Slipstream is what allows them to do this. Their eyes can be resized and implanted – they grant toggleable telescopic vision that can also see through water and thin (less than 1") materials. - If you want this to see through...

Alright, all of this is fine by me! Passing it off to Vic for the approval since it's their setting.

This entire thing reads as 'Galdr but better' to me, so I want to curb some of its utility given that it has no set identity and would fit into any build. Initiation - This Mutagen is so extreme I'm going to say it'll cost a Globe of Alkahest to get started. It should also kill about two thirds...

1. Give names to the Active (if you give them any), Passive, and Buff abilities, and give them their own descriptors of what they do and how they work before the skill tiers. 2. Combine your active ability into the buff ability; specify only body body fat and bone mass, or only body mass. For...

. Arcana. Arcana Views For a registered member of any Aletepetl caste including a registered foreigner, most Arcana is legal and accepted provided both parties consent to its use. Galsterei are looked upon with the most favor, while Glamour other than Slaodh and Grist is scrutinized with...

. Time. Tonalpohualli Tonalpohualli is a terralogical phenomenon and calendar used for keeping the passage of time in a place where Aarda cannot be seen. The calendar is represented by a dais comprised of 15 repeating day-symbols arranged into four 90-day "kalpas" across the year. Rather than...

. Religion. Serpent Worship Aztlan do not have a word for their faith. To them, it simply is, though when pressed a Dwarf attempting to translate it shall refer to this as 'Serpent Worship' - many point to their practices as barbaric, but to them, every aspect of their faith is necessary for the...

. Castes. Altepetl A polyvalent term for the castes and titles of Aztlan, its laws and faith, and the aesthetic creative bias of dwarves. All customs of the dwarves are invoked and governed by this one word, Altepetl - Altepetl Law, Altepetl Aesthete, Altepetl Faith, and Altepetl Castes...

. History Dwarves are the youngest of Mænnish races, and yet what they have done in their short time as an empire has eclipsed anything seen on Antarok. Deep Ælves Cor'Norai- the Sea Ælves- once exiled their dissidents to the deepest sea caves, stripping them of their gills and fins. Over time...

Aztlan Codex Linkmap Link Link Link Link Link Link Link Link Link Link . Aztlan Aztlan refers to the greater society of Dwarves, and their fractured empire throughout the Ur'Duun. Only four Dwarven Great Holds remain: Tletlitetl Tletlitetl rests upon the edge of the beating heart of the...

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3,000 Words; +20 XP Summary: Yona hunts an assortment of mundane humans in Hespaeria, then makes a large crystal out of blood, and their bone. Aster helps design some of her requests, and they get tangled up with each other before she sends him off. Mature for sexual themes, and gore...

˗ˋˏ ◜ ♡ ◝ ˎ´˗ ꘜ‿︵‿ꘜ March 5th, Year 124 ︶꒦︶︶꒷꒦︶︶꒷꒦︶꒦ ▲‿▲Yonakouchi wove a charm of flowers into her mane, so that it would stay tangled in her hair as a Grimlocke when she changed with Seeming. It said: grant Seeming unto thee at my touch, the Imprint of mine choosing. Its Eudaimonic...

˗ˋˏ ◜ ♡ ◝ ˎ´˗ ꘜ‿︵‿ꘜ Canonized ︶꒦︶︶꒷꒦︶︶꒷꒦︶꒦ ▲‿▲ +10 XP +1 Black Star Diopside - Terrassimilation, Æhti Æhti better stop being so tasty, or he might find himself having to fill Velho's wine glass before long!