OOC Approved Felinog Modification

[Makt]

In line with the new requirements, I've submitted the following changes to the Felinog:
Compendium Link

Notable Features:

• See Beast Magic, below:

Beast Magic:​

Felinog's Wrath

This magic uses Saol as its metaphor. A felinog is assumed to have Master Saol spell reserves.

Minor Merit
Yes

Active Ability: Regeneration – Allows the user to heal.

Active Ability: Roar – A mighty roar that emits a cone capable of deafening

Passive Ability: Quick Reflexes - Felinog have incredibly quick reaction speeds, similar to those of a typical cat.

Buff Ability: Troll's Strength – When a Felinog becomes aggressive, their muscles bulge immensely, granting them their superior strength.

Novice
At this stage, the user is just beginning to learn how to roar menacingly

Regeneration: Can heal minor cuts and scrapes.
Roar: 5 ft reach, can scare away CR1 creatures.
Quick Reflexes: Not available
Troll's Strength: Not available

Apprentice
The user's roar gets a little better.

Regeneration: Can heal gashes.
Roar: 20 ft reach, can scare away CR1 creatures. Loud enough to cause discomfort.
Quick Reflexes: Not available
Troll's Strength: Not available

Journeyman
The user becomes extraordinarily good at reacting to danger.

Regeneration: Can fix broken limbs, though they may not heal at the right angle.
Roar: 50 ft reach, can scare away CR2 creatures. Loud enough to make targets flinch.
Quick Reflexes: Reflexes are on par with a cat.
Troll's Strength: Not available

Expert
The user beings to learn how to expand their muscles

Regeneration: Can heal most injuries, save for those affecting vital organs.
Roar: 100 ft reach, can scare away CR3 creatures. Causes tinnitus that lasts for several minutes
Quick Reflexes: Reflexes are on par with a cat.
Troll's Strength: Can increase muscle mass of their entire body, or select muscle groups for a minute. This allows them to lift 250 pounds more than they otherwise would be able to. This multiplies one's strength by 1.25.

Master
The user has superb control over all abilities

Regeneration: Can heal most any injury and even regrow limbs.
Roar: 250 ft reach, can scare away CR4 creatures. Can deafen those caught in the cone for an hour.
Quick Reflexes: Reflexes are slightly faster than a cat's.
Troll's Strength: Can increase muscle mass of their entire body, or select muscle groups for a minute. This multiplies one's strength by 1.5.

Ascended
The user is unrivaled in their ability to frighten foes and fight those that stand their ground.

Regeneration: Can heal from any ailment save from a beheading.
Roar: 250ft reach, can scare away CR5 creatures. Can bust eardrums and knock the wind out of those caught in the cone.
Quick Reflexes: Reflexes are noticeably faster than a cat's.
Troll's Strength: Can increase muscle mass of their entire body, or select muscle groups for a minute. This doubles one's strength.

 

[Hananozō]

Troll's Strength: Scale this from 1.25x to 2x the strength of its user at Ascended
Quick Reflexes: Provide more detail on exactly what their senses are like per tier, and be sure to scale it.

 

[Makt]

done!

 

[Makt]

the skill tier descriptions for Quick Reflexes no longer have numbers.

If this still doesn't work then I'd ask for some suggestions on wording

 

[Khafra]

Active Ability: Regeneration – Allows for a cast of Nymhea Healing at an equivalent tier.

Explain per tier what the healing is, rather than hinging on Nymhea, and clarify that it is self healing. Saolite wording might be changed depending on how Nymhea functions at its release. There is wording from Nekron Soul Stars you could borrow if you made this into a buff, however.

 

[Makt]

specified each tier!

 

[Haruspex]

Alright, all of this is fine by me! Passing it off to Vic for the approval since it's their setting.

 

[Vicissitude]

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Works for me! Just bear in mind how sound travels so people/creatures at the edge of its effect range for Roar would likely have a tapered effect (this applies to any sound-based attack).

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