꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Wulfnoð+27 XP (~2700 words) +Artificed Goggles ❀ Comments ❀ This was honestly quite a charming read and a good insight into Wulfnoð as a person :) The overall content is fine, there are just some small notes mostly relevant to...

Summer 03, year 124 of the third age After Wulfnoð took his leave, Vuzembi slunk away himself, melting into the stone beneath his feet and traveling through the caverns one with rock. He would be safe that way, and soon he’d meet back up with his small found family of other Galsterei. To them...

winter 32, year 125 of the third age Some time in the early evening, a knock would come at Kage’s door– though the visitor would not be somebody there for the home’s actual owner. The Ælven woman, sporting a long, green braid and skin pale wine hue, had arrived ‘dressed’ in nothing but...

꧁══════════•༺༉ { Approved} ༉༻•══════════꧂ Alright, this looks fine to me! Once it gets play tested there's always a chance for some changes still, but otherwise it's approved. ꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Kage+18 XP Abraia+6 XP Vicissitude+3 XP ❀ Comments ❀ Contribution received! If you're curious about where exactly the corpses are going, click here. ꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Velho+3 XP ❀ Comments ❀ yum ꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

Fall 25, year 124 of the third age As Kage’s Treants trundled along in their search, they would pass various types of wildlife– though this wildlife seemed to pay them no mind. Perhaps, being plants, the predators saw no interest in them. After all, Treants contained no meat. As for the...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Kage & Fluffy+20 XP ❀ Comments ❀ It should be worth establishing what Kage's ultimate goal is regarding the Huo, as he'd need to have discussed that with his superiors before having been granted leave to do this. I am fine with...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Engill+17 XP +Florabind to Thrystingr Kage & White+15 XP Shadow+14 XP ❀ Comments ❀ Great thread! Kage's laziness is something to be questioned when it comes to ensuring the safety of a young Æld'Norai, but at the same time, not...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Kage+7 XP ❀ Comments ❀ Remember to tally your spell casts even in solos! :) ꧁══════════•༺༉ ❁ ❀ ❁ ༉༻•══════════꧂

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Mercy+13 XP Kage+11 XP Kirin+7 XP ❀ Comments ❀ At least not everyone in Jian is lacking in restraint. I also find myself wondering after the motivation behind Mercy's sudden shift towards a more civil demeanor when speaking to...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Fluffy [Kage]+13 XP +4 Human [Jianese] Imprints ❀ Comments ❀ You might want to consider investing some points in Fluffy's combat skills as well as either Acting or Psychology if you want her to continue to play roles like this...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Hikaru+5 XP Kage+10 XP +27g of Aetherite - Sundered, 135SP +100g of Aetherite - Purchased, 1100SP ❀ Comments ❀ Fælnir mages are but Alkahest-y fruit, ripe for the picking, if they cannot prove themselves otherwise useful. She &...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Sjal+10 XP ❀ Comments ❀ With Sjal's abilities, one could imagine it wouldn't have been all too taxing to snap her entire battalion into her Pocket Dimension, leave a tiny sliver of a window open to watch until the Futo passed, and...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Sjal+12 XP Abraia+4 XP ❀ Comments ❀ Kage would be notified of this little excursion due to his career & his link to Abraia. He would be instructed to get her account of exactly where she went and with whom, utilizing his Fathom...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Kage+7 XP Mercy+12 XP ❀ Comments ❀ When tallying your Spell Reserves, use a running list format that keeps the spent reserves from previous posts, such as: "3x Journeyman druidism to make the dogs 3x novice vitae to raise the...

꧁══════════•༺༉ { Feedback } ༉༻•══════════꧂ The overall mechanics are fine, there are just some things I'd change with the tiers & a minor edit. 1. Aeris Alkahest is called Aerisite; please correct this throughout the text. You can probably find any of the other ways you typed it by ctrl+F the...

Fall 25, year 124 of the third age With a small unit of arboreal minions at his disposal, Kage would be able to explore the cave whilst they ventured forth into the stormy woods to search for the vague concept of ‘a stygian.’ This instruction meant about as much to them as the word did to Kage...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Kage+30 XP +Florabind to haerpsi +CR4 spider familiar & Imprint (Fluffy) Shadow+14 XP ❀ Comments ❀ Remember to include your spells regardless of if they're PC or CNPC casts, even if Fluffy's minor spellwork here likely wouldn't...

꧁══════════• ༺༉ { Reviewed/Canon } ༉༻•══════════꧂ ❀ Rewards ❀ Abraia+3 XP +990g of Anathemite ❀ Comments ❀ Hey! Sorry it took so long to officially canonize this; I had actually thought I'd circled back to this earlier but didn't, my bad. If you do anything with Grist Ensorcelling, make...