Answered CNPC(S) for mercy

[Mercy]

CNPCS

◖ • Ophelia •Kataali • CNPC3◗

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  Name: Ophelia Montrosse
  
  Race: Cor'norai-Dragon( Mongrel )
  
  Age: 21
  
  NPC Type: CNPC
  
  Grist Stuff
  
  Embodies: Onryo
  Seeks: Retribution
  Governs: Luxium
  
  Merits:
  
  Minor Merit 1: Radiance - 0 SP ( Radiance)
  
  Minor Merit 2: Grist - 0 (Racial Merit)
  
  Minor Merit 3: Nymheia - 25 XP (Spring 125, Mercy)
  
  Skills:
  
  Radiance (250/250) Master
  Mysticism (50/250) Journeyman
  Grist (25/250) Apprentice
  Animism (100/250) Expert
  Nymheia(100/250) Expert
  
  Skill Points:
  
  100 Starting (Unassigned)
  -0 Radiance Merit
  -0 Grist Merit (Racial Merit)
  -100 Animism ( 0 Starting)
  50 Mysticism for 250 SP(Fall 124)
  25 Grist for 100 SP (Fall 124)
  250 Radiance For 2000 SP[Spring 125]
  100 Nymheia For 750 SP[Spring 125]
  
  

  Info:​

  
  Ophelia is a beacon of light amid a world enveloped with darkness. She has a grotesque appearance. Her skin is excessively pale, dry and gaunt, she sports a slender frame, and lengthy dark-blonde hair. Ophelia prefers not to frighten those who she chooses to befriend, and thus she wears a black blindfold; covering the sockets her eyes once rested in. Often, she is clad in an off-white dress with a yellow tint and stained with the aqua-de-vitae that leaks from what once were her eyes. Ophelia is referred to as the "Harbinger of Light", a well-deserved epithet. She was taken prisoner and forced into slavery at a young age; wherein she served her maleficent masters and did their bidding without question. However, when the opportunity arose, she slaughtered her captors, having carved out her own eyes as a tribute to Mimira; she vowed to never be harmed by or attracted to a man again. Her empathy knows no bounds, but for her comrades she does not hesitate to lay waste to any threat that dares to stand before her. Although she has a strong disdain for violence; she becomes a merciless huntress, who uses a combination of Mysticism & Echolocation to see, and reduce her foes to ash. She is fierce, and when she speaks her voice carries a ghastly sound; due to having damaged vocal cords which sounds like two simultaneous voices.
  
  
  
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  Name: Kataali Soveal
  
  Race: Cor'Norai-Krakon
  Age: 24
  
  Npc Type: CNPC
  
  Grist Stuff
  
  Embodies: Hydrophiinae
  Seeks: Blades
  Governs: Imber
  
  Skills
  Grist ( 100/250 )
  Axes ( 100/100 )[Master]
  Medicine( 50/100 )[Expert]
  Unarmed Combat ( 50/100)[Expert]
  
  Skills Ledger
  
  100 Starting (Unassigned)
  -00 Grist Merit
  100 Axes for 750 SP (Winter 125)
  -100 Grist (0 Remaining starting)
  50 Medicine for 250 SP(Winter 125)
  50 Unarmed Combat for 250SP(Winter 125)
  
  

  Info​

  Mercy met Kataali under unusual circumstances; she was one of his kidnappers. She was part of the party of approximately six Cor'norai that were sent to capture Mercy and bring him to Laevos. She fights with a ferocity like that of her Husband's own and is a merciless cold-blooded killer on the field of battle. She found Mercy attractive despite his half-blood and is fiercely loyal to him; she is his Wife after all. Despite the fact Marriages in Cor'norai culture do not take place for Love.
  
  
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[Vicissitude]

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Hey Mercy, I believe that Kataali is approved per the quest that is already ongoing with me & Haruspex.

As for Ophelia, as a CNPC, she does not get a Racial Merit, so her Grist or Radiance will have to have a 25 XP cost. Otherwise, I believe her skills are fine provided those SP purchases are valid (I believe they are, but will double-check).

Other than that, the issue with her is that with her current repertoire of skills, she simply isn't as formidable a fighter as you make her out to be in her bio. She will need more supporting sensory skills to survive in live combat because she, as she is, could easily be killed in the time it takes her to make those vocal calls. There are no holds barred in war, and nobody is going to wait for her to do that. A bullet or a spell is faster than the delay it takes for her to make the call.

The last point is a nitpick, but nonetheless I must point it out because biology doesn't work this way, even in our fantasy universe. Her eyes would not be bleeding anymore; they are wounds, and as such, would heal over with scar tissue in time. She can maintain the visual of the bloody tears through either paint or tattoos, or if you want you can have her repeatedly reopen the wounds, but her body would naturally have healed by now otherwise.​

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